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Sitting on the window sill listening to the rain fall.
nothing ever sounded so beautifull.
Wondering silently.
thoughts spinning in my head.
Wondering if i am the only one here
and everything is just fragments of my own mind?
Wondering what it would be like if you were here with me.
We could sit.and listen to the rain fall.
Wondering if you ARE here.
And i just can't see you.
Wondering if i could ever sit with you.
And if you would love me too?
©2006-2009 ~Lucifers-engel
:iconlucifers-engel:

Author's Comments

This is one of my poems i wrote while at Lime Trees.
its personal so any insult to it will be taken as an insult to me.
i know its not very good. but hey.

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:iconinuyasharobbie:
^^ awwwww deep and full of emotion! I love it!

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~Even if the morrow is barren of promises, nothing shall forestall my return~
:iconcagedraven:
I know that feeling really well... :+fav:

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Sticks and stones may break my bones, but cages were made for me. So lock me up, keep the key and do what you want to me.
:iconoh-so-emo:
aww.
bee-yoo-tii-full[:
xx

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×Im.Staring.In.The.Mirror.Looking.Back.At.The.Person.I.Hate×
:iconweitmare:
I don't know why you would say it's not good... I like it :) I really feel like I know what you are thinking and feeling. Nice job :)
:iconlucifers-engel:
thanks. i wrote it when i was 14 in a asylum i was in for a couple of months.

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And that kids is why we don't talk to strangers.
:iconsorrowburn:
Extremely haunting as I for one, know what LimeTrees is. Good work Jess.

Lookin forward to seeing you again soon!

Ozz.

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Wit + Sarcasm X Misanthropy2 - Amiability + Charm =SorrowBurn

"And when it all came crashin' down, I became withdrawn and the only thing I knew how to do is to keep on keepin' on."
R.Z.
:iconjarhead826:
Without the limetree context, I think it would be an ordinary, too well worn idea. However, you stating where this particular poem was written puts a whole new life line into it, because you make it into a new concept. I love it. It's sad...

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*...need....more....doooolllsss......*:o
:iconlucifers-engel:
thanks and u too mate!

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And that kids is why we don't talk to strangers.
:iconlucifers-engel:
thanks.

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And that kids is why we don't talk to strangers.

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